My review, your song.

Your bass instrument is not tuned to the lead, and its not playing in the same music signature either.

0:18 the synth goes a little detuned more on the others.

Don't make all of your instruments so loud, it actually lessens potential audio quality. Better to be too quiet then too loud.

0:55 when the snare plays and the volume levels get fuzzy, theres some clipping and distortion occuring from the high volume instriments.

1:25 gated/stutter rhythmn could have come earlier in the song to vary things.

The song is only 2 minutes long and really only has one riff to ti. An alternate riff or varied acompaniment would help make it less rpeeititive.

Song lacks an intro and outro.

More time investment will merit better results.