hmmmm

this song has some really good spots in it and then it just doesnt go anywhere. i think you could do somthing pretty awesome with this song, as is its not terrible

Needs...

...some serious love in the mastering department. I had to turn my speakers down to half after the first 10 seconds because I was actually starting to feel real pain in my ears. That's not an exaggeration or figure of speech, my ears actually felt severe pain from the excessive high frequencies.