Aaaand here's the version with the vocals. Sorry the vocal takes suck, I'm no singer. But I just want feedback on if the melody ideas are good etc. Cause, this shit's gonna be played live.
This song is sequential to my previous song "Launch".
I'm eating Ramen out of a tube
Watching Saturday morning toons
On an overcast afternoon
In space I'm far from you
A couple minutes away from the moon,
My vessel for the
Trip out into the dark
For a shaky truth I embark
A starry love on my mark
Five seconds to landing,
And I've only started this thing
Leaving the thought
Will it fly or fail?
Soaring past gas giants
Gliding on the Milkyway
Darting toward aurora K
Feeding off the lack of days
There's no trouble
Nor passion love or hate
No crime or death
Just silent sleep
Befriend the bots and wire up yourself it's time you let go
Maintain your heart of gold
Soaring past rings tenfold
Gliding on Andromeda
Darting toward solar spread
Feeding off the sun baked bread
We're all sure to die
Spacemen void of tears
Impervious,
Evasive, I have found
Home is your dead
Hell is not my home
If hell is home and home is here and I'm far from a hell
If home's not hell and home is there I'm home and I'm in hell
If hell is here and home is not then home is not hell
Oh hell I'm going fucking crazy out here I'm gonna fucking claw your cables out and swim swim swim swim
Pushing through gassy plains
Dragged along the asteroid belt
Stumbling off the stardust path
Starving for a guest alive
Been told I'm a loon
A bitter buffoon
Was gone by noon
Been told I'm a loon
A bitter buffoon
And I'll stay till noon
I'm dying, I'm dying, oh
To pilot my moon
Awesome
Really dig this idea in it's entirety. Not really what I expected, at first.
But you really captured a lot of elements, and the wide range here is very well transitioned. I'm very intrigued by vocal diversities in songs. This is fantastic. Soft vocals, heavy vocals, etc... all that stuff mixing in just a great variety of music that blended so well here.
Wow man, really awesome.
Current Score
4.13 / 5.00 (+ 0.27)
shiiiiiiiiiit
this is some high quality shit. most of the melodies were fucking great but there were a few parts that sounded a bit like silly pop music. i don't really remember it may have been like only 1 part from the beginning.
also, is this a solo project?
I'm actually experiementing with pop styles, so it was intended. I kind of like a reaaally wide range of genres.
Glad you like it though! Yeah, it's a solo project. I found a band to play this stuff, real cool and stuff.
Loved it
Man, this song rocks!
I really love the emotions it contains. One time, it's calm and after a moment, it brings anxiety. Great job!
Also, I think, the vocals are not that bad.
Thanks! I think it's just more fun when a song has a lot of feelings and dynamics in it.
Thanks for reviewin'!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
Kor-Rune 
