Horrible timing

You say no one values your stuff. Its worth nothing. You really should either: A. Quit this and try to make flash or something.

B. Try harder. Dont say you will. Do it.

HELLO

yo rob just wondering but wut FL studios do u have? respond pls this time atlest

not much melody

First off it had a great begining. I got into it, but then it faded to the melody. The melody was alright, but nothing speacial, and it seemed out of sinc with the rest of the song. Once it met with the begingin it really seemed misplaced and out of sinc. The beat was pretty basic, but it fit the song. There wasn't much diversity in the song either, it seemed like 3 maybe 4 patterns and it repeated them over and over.

It was a good attempt, and if you built apon what you have here, you could make this a hopping beat! Nice try, keep it up!

Sorry to be so critical, only trying to help you improve. Hope this helped!

DJ Zeeber