well
the lyrics are kinda hard to hear, but good job none the less
4/5
Beat is from 50 cent.
remake of a nother old song , with my new mic.
heres the lyrics
I can see the devil
hes up in the trees
with a sniper scope
im down on my knees
trying to duck shit
but his above it
one step ahead
the devils camouflaged and i have dot on my head
make gun noise
he some how,is now in my room
he drags me by my hair.
In hell my soul he consumes
i face my demise
no one here, can feel my pains and my cries
help me please
its friday the 13th
but theres no jason vorhees
no crystal lake,
but still i feel like im in horror scene
my eyes are rollin back
ears start to bleed
inside my flesh
i feel the maggots start to feed
theres no need for this
my wrists are all slit
vertically
to were the veins always bleed
fuck it
i really cant complain
cause im really insane
and anything is better, then being in pain
from smashing my head against the wall
i guess thats why there padded
well
the lyrics are kinda hard to hear, but good job none the less
4/5
you lyrics needs work.
the beat iz perfect, lol from 50 ay, maybe try turning that sadness into anger?
Yea i know its from 50. what with the lyrics need work? Not gonna lie i think i added to much effect on this song. just trying new stuff since i got a new mic.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.