wow this is underrated

I like it :D

So here we go, this is gonna be some very picky stuff I'm about to say.

Bad: The kick definitely wasn't punchy enough, nor deep enough to really call it a house kick, it was ok but definitely needs eqed.

There were moments were the kick just stopped and it was completely random to the listener.. Try and make it a little more predictable so they can at least enjoy it and not be like, wait what? haha

The vocals sounded a little off time, try and make sure they're completely synced correctly.

The mastering, was ehh could've definitely been much better. Start off by making sure the kick is nice and loud ;) Then eq everything else for the most part to your liking, make sure the vocals are loud and clear.. etc that kind of stuff

Also work on the structure of the song, it (as i said before) sounded completely random with the vocals and chords coming etc.

In conclusion:
This is all very nit-picky things that you can work on next time you make a song to ensure that it turns out the best possible. Just make sure you pay so much attention to details and your songs will be amazing ;)

baffling

who the hell are the voting base in the newgrounds audio portal? Third demo tonight I've come across in the top fifty. I'd have liked to have known what the collaboration was going to turn out to be.

THIS I MADNESSS

Crazeh lol xD look at the rating lol