ok

this song for me has to many hihats. the begginning sucked a little. but the end was ok

You used like 3 instruments

It sounded really cool though, but there's more you can put into it I'm sure.

should have just made a loop

sounded okay at first but you did basically the same thing over and over again, which is why i gave you 2 on diversity. you used sucky instruments besides the melody, but overall, it was okay! good job