some issues

No bassline for one. The song feels empty with no bottom end. Second, the synths are not mixed well. That one that comes in around 1:07 dominates the whole spectrum and isnt necessarily pleasant to listen to. Lastly, the parts were off key. You need to keep all of your notes in the same scale, otherwise it ends up sounding random and unpleasant. Its true that its possible to tastefully go offscale but it takes a lot of experience to know when is a good time to do it.

Hope this helps