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Uploaded
Mar 18, 2010 | 7:42 PM EDT
File Info
Song
6 MB
4 min 22 sec
Score
3.70 / 5.00

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Score:
Rated 3.70 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
516 Plays | 36 Downloads
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Genres:
Electronic - Techno
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Author Comments

Finally finished!

Wow I can't believe it took me more than a week to get this finished song out. I am happy to announce it completed. I made this in FL studio with loops that I made myself. I used some echoing effects, and some higher pitches for counter-melodies. Please listen to the whole song to get the full experience of the of the piece. It really starts to get interesting near the end.
The song also sounds better on a high end sound system. You can get the full apprecation of the bass, and how it contrasts with the rest of the song.
This song took me hours upon hours of time, so please give it an honest review. I really don't want to see this song on the bottom shelf!

Thank you so much for listening and, of course, Thank You Newgrounds!!!

Kriegless

Reviews


KrayonKrayon

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Not bad.

Apologies for taking so long to get back to you. I have a lot on right now, and it generally takes me about an hour or so to review a piece.

Alright. This isn't too bad, per se. You have some decent concepts, but they're overshadowed somewhat by unnecessary extensions and a lack of anything particularly catchy.

The beginning is fairly important in a song, many people will skip a song if the beginning isn't interesting enough. Especially with electronic music. You can get away with it in classical, but techno is generally listened to because of it's punchiness.

The beat is far too simple to draw people in. Indeed, it puts you off. Because the beginning is somewhat boring, we expect the rest of the song to be as well. The high... thing is harsh on the ears, pull out some of the higher frequencies, they literally hurt my ears with these headphones - and I'm not even going overly loud. Basically, all parts with that really shrill, tinny sound need to have the higher frequencies pulled out.

You have a good premise with the main tune, however, what you have is a backing tune, not a major one. You need something on top of that to catch the listener's attention. Something punchier, harder. THe contrast will help your piece immeasurably.

The main problem with the tune is that it's a flowing one. Everything is a flowing part, you need something to contrast that, so that it's imphasised. It's a good tune, but it needs something more to actually work properly.

The beat is also too simplistic. Bring in a few more beat structures and layer in a bit more complexity, make us bob our heads to it. What you have right now sounds rounded off. There needs to be a definite punch, or hard sound to it. The beat, in itself, is fine. But, as with all the other parts of the song, it needs an extra little something to properly work.

The middle of the song has a very nice blending of melodies and counter-melodies, but they would work even better if they were contrasted with a harder beat and melody structure and sound.

So essentially. What you have in this song is good. But it's half a song. It has a lot of potential, but you need to spend some time adding in the necessary other half.

Do that and you'll probably end up in the top bunch of artists here.

So remember, punch and power. You need a bit more complexity in the beats, a whole bunch of harder elements and a more definite melody section. This is techno, so make us dance!

Or, failing that, at least make us want to bob our heads in time. :P

Good luck! Krayon.


People find this review helpful!
Kriegless responds:

If you ever get this, listen to the the re-done version of this song. It is much much better. Also listen to my new songs. Resonance, and Stalemate are two songs that i produced in the last 2 months. I am more proud of the latter, but I spend an equal amount of time on both. Thank you for reviewing this song. I had never actually read this review. I am glad i can come and look back at it in retrospect. It is very helpful and i did redo the song, so...please listen to the new version, and my other songs. Even if you don't leave a review (which i hope you do), see the progress that i have made.

Thank you!

=KL=


william-rosekranswilliam-rosekrans

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Tis Good.

Its a good song; I like the theme. The begging makes me think of party boy dancing in peoples faces.LOL

I would like to see more music from you in the future.


Kriegless responds:

Haha yeah. I will definitely be making more music. When will it come out? I have no clue. However, whenever I start a song I always finish it within a couple of weeks.

Thank you!

Kriegless


omario650omario650

Rated 5 / 5 stars

yes yes yes

this is super cool.


Kriegless responds:

I appreciate it!