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Blue (WIP)

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take it for what it is any critiques would be appreciated, it's way to big to upload the full thing coming in at 24MB I cut it almost in half & drop it to 128Kbps to upload. any advice on what to do
if you like it etc, Working on a place to upload the full song to stream for a complete listen.

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Cptlavander

2010-04-30 12:48:34

thats bad ass

i love it man, seriously this is one hell of a groovy mix, i really like the female vocals once in a while its a really chill beat man

Stargenx

2010-04-30 01:09:04

6/10

The singing in the beginning was washed out and kept repeating. There were too many bars that were the same. The song didn't draw me in at all. You should work on adding a climax. It sort of droned on and on for a while. The singing was also sort of off-tune which became incredibly annoying after a while. I heard some volume peaking in there too. The volume on the singing became harshly loud after a while.

DjDema

2010-03-16 01:50:18

I Wanted To Like It

Okay, so... I'm not a fan of trancy songs. But the intro to this was dope. The only problem I had was a really heavy pad into the song and then the 90s came out me with that punch bass. Bro, you gotta get a better punch bass. It was not cutting what this song is capable of. I think bass is what killed this for me cuz I really did not feel a climax in this song at all and with techno that's what you really want. Though, I love the voice sampling. Thought it was terrific in small aspects that's for sure! Sampling was good.

Mayvix responds:

thank you for the review, yeah the bass is a little dated but it's kinda an old mix too.
coming out of i want to say FL 5 the full version is available here
http://www.myspace.com/sadmadwave old page working on a new page.

This is the one we went back and tried to do some touching up on. make it a little more "polished". if you have time to listen to that one let me know.
and i look in to a more modern punch bass & climax ending.

Dannyboi93

2010-03-15 08:44:33

Youtube

get a picture smack everything in movie maker, then stick it on youtube.

I must admit, it is pretty choopy... but how you managed to get a 6min track to 24mb i will never know =S

Its pretty plain too, its just... average? Maybe its me but it aint good and it aint bad its just smack bang in the middle

Mayvix responds:

the full thing clocks in a about 11 minutes. Was made between a friend and I.
and i agree with your Review. I also think 11 mins for something between
not good, but not bad is a lot. though so easy to do with an instrumental
and of a dance,techno etc track. I'm mainly trying to look for elements and stuff to build off of & shorten It down as well as looking into adding Vox probably Female.
Thanks for the review Much appreciated.