Lets fix this song pls

Goes to show...

how much potential a song that seemed ok could have. I love how much you really brought out the songs good and emphasized it. I love this and could listen to it for hours on end, and just might. I don't think I can give any suggestions on it, this is the first time I just loved every aspect of a song.

You've got a huge amount of skill...

...for being 13. I'm not a big fan of generic dance like this, but from this song, I can tell that you're skill will evolve into something great!

For the song itself, its pretty catchy. I liked the melodies and the synths you used. I think the hi hats were a bit to loud though. I really enjoyed the little build up at 1:34 :)

Just keep producing and keep learning about FL Studio man. I use it as well and you can make some pretty insane sounds if you know how to use it :) I looked at a few of your other songs as well and I encourage you to branch out from techno/dance. I bet you could make some AMAZING classical pieces if you tried it! :)

Fell free to remix any of my songs! I want you to get practice and expand your skill level as much as possible!

Best wishes for the future! :)

nice

gah! You come out with good music! I so need to get Fl studios, but I have a list of more important stuff piled up first. Great work man, keep it up.

Deffinitly worth listening to.

I might even go so far as be be even better than the origional, which is one of my favorites from the NG peps. Great work. I like how you stayed with the origional melody but put into a surprisingly new and adventurous context. Great work sir! *salutes* My ears are enjoying this greatly. You have done a great service to us all for your hard work. Thank you, and follow your heart to the beat of life.