Nice effort
Nice start, but the chord progression from 0:05-0:07 feels very awkward. And then when it repeats at 0:19, 0:25...etc. Feels like there should be a note or two more in there just to make the change a little less stark.
I like the little bits of brass and then later harp/violin, but I think in general you need to change it up a little more in the accompanying strings from 0-1:20, it gets a tad repetitive. I like the chord progression (except the aforementioned part), and I like the gists of the melody/harmony, but I think it could do with a little more work.