BLARGH
I'm not sure if the sounds of the strings (the ones in the beginning and past the second half with the sudden takeover of the melody, like 2:14) fit in very well with the rest of the piece, but I guess that's just a different style than I'm used to. I really liked the section starting at 0:54 or something. But yeah, otherwise I liked the piece; it's got a nice sort of feeling to it, a bit detached but still driven.