AWSUm

U ROCK :D

I agree with everyone else.

I liked the start, but then it got kinda too spastic. What DAW do you use, because you can eliminate the need of amplifying by doing it in the DAW.

Just to let you know...

I was the absolute first to vote this. I go at the back of list for good songs. i voted a five for you. Its ok if u dont beleive me. but it said 0/5.00 if u were wondering. yeah nice job. sorry i forgot to reveiw.

Pretty good song

However i have to agree with the reviewer below me i see the differences of the mood from the beginning with the vocal parts to the middle which just becomes beats and rhythms although vocals are sang then you can hardly hear any vocals at All. I hope a remake is made, and if you can make it one mood throughout the whole song would just make it ever so better. Still (as it just said in the song) "keep on trying" :D

Beginning Is The Best Part

Well unfortunately I have to be the buzzkill and be the first non-10 review. The portion with the vocals is excellent, and the vocalist is a very talented singer singing to a suitably-produced background. But after the vocal portion, it sounds like you went off and did your own thing which didn't match the mood that the beginning had established. The bass at the end is also too distorted for the average pair of headphones (I have a pretty good pair and it's still too distorted for my tastes). A key point to remember is that we can always explain our reasons for imperfections like distortion (you cited bass amplification), but the listener ultimately only cares what it sounds like and not the producer's reasoning behind it.