Positive Commentary
I don't follow the general aversion towards the tunes here. I think your music is great. It's elegant, playful and somewhat experimental.
My visual experience of this song includes the scorch of a sunny sunday and the lethargy of dawn. I imagine a person waking up in a white room, dressing up, walking out and over to the local convenience store.
The synths or samples have an analog feel. Some of them I liken to a keyboard (DX, rhodes). Many have the crackling of vinyl, which is both soothing and enjoyable.
Timing is balanced very well; no part of the song seemed awkward or boring. In essence, I have no negative constructive criticism on this song.
Stay with the music and take care,
-Extracy-