I agree with your comments

I wouldn't necessarily say that it's a questionable instrumental selection, but you've certainly gone a long way toward fulfilling the "awesome melodies". As it sounds, you've got a great base for the track with the beat and the primary melody, which has been nicely complimented by the various alternative instruments that you've thrown into the mixing pot.

With the pace being so quickfire, it's a very challenging piece to keep up with, but there are certainly areas that you can improve on. Perhaps consider draining the tempo for a short while, adding some sort of a bass solo, which just cuts down on the frantic energy of the track, before building back up to what you've produced for the rest of it.

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Funny

Hey, this is a very funny song, I like the fast beat a lot. The drum beat is very simple, but played in this tempo it sounds really cool.

The other instruments don't seem to fit together too much, but this only adds to the funny atmosphere. It's all very weird and crazy and that's what I like about the song.

However, some parts seem to be a bit too loud (at around 40 seconds into the song for example). Or maybe it's just that I don't like the guitar sound too much here.

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