9 lives for 5 slam jumps

takes me back to the day when i was stamping on the littel polerbaer for lives in crash bandacoot(tm) ^^

what a mess!

hahahha wow this is imcredible haahhaha i dont know how write this but no problem keep this msics , bye

*Vomits*

This isn't even frickin techno! What are you smoking?! This song is slow, and the melody reall really sucks. I can't even listen to it!

Pretty good

A nice first submission, but you're using a lot of default instruments/samples. Was this made using fruityloops? It sounds like it. Anyhow, I'd recommend you experiment with new drum/synth samples... you can usually find free packs to download from different sites. It'll help so your songs don't sound so defaultish. Aside from that, it's a nice arrangement, but I'd stay away from the multiple open hi-hat hits in the song, it just sounds cheesy.

Another redeeming quality is that the song loops pretty well.

Good stuff...

Nice stuff man, i realy enyoied it.
Maby you could been a bit shorter but
thats my own opinion. Keep up the good
work.