I made this song a long time ago, but i did some work on it lately, and finally perfected it I think. Maybe the synth guitar is a little too strong, I'll need reviews to really know, but I felt a really strong connection to this one as i was making it. So i hope you enjoy listening to it as much as i enjoyed making it :D
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i dont if ur still makin music, but ill review this i guess :].
well the switch to minor(harmonic?) in the refrain doesnt fit with the song too well, u shoulda kinda just stayed in melodic imo. There are some really delicious parts, such as aroudn the 1 minute mark, writing wise this song is very tasty. U coulda jsut kept the kicks at 4/4s as well.
again everything is my opinion, good luck!
Spiffeh.
I really like it. The guitar synth is perfect. Though I'm not sure I like the cymbal; seems out of place.
And this might just be me, but it sounds like you were really inspired at the beginning and struggled to keep up the brilliance as you realized you only had a minute and it needed to be much longer.
Or at least, the above is what happens to me. :3
Still, liked it. A bunch.
Thanks for reviewing first of all, it seems in this day and age, no one has the time to do this common courtesy anymore :D And yah, the middle piano part was a tad uninspired, i'll probably edit it for a couple new instruments and riffs for that part, its meant to be calm but conflicting and epic from the guitars, but i just couldn't manage it. Now that regents are over for me for now, I'll go back in and work on it some more. Thanks dude, be sure to pass it on, I'd like some more critique :3
sweet
the song is like a hot knife through butter (that means its good)
:D Awww, thanks, I listen to alot of the music here on NG, and I never feel like I can measure up, aha.. But, with reviews like this, I will go on!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
Laesil 
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