its more like trance i think

the dance genre says it all by its name already...its 2 slow 2 dance on this track...
but its ALOT better than the original so kudos..ure gettin better :]

remmeber me? xD

nah u probably dun...
in ure ''dance'' track u shud get some DANCE beat 2 it...

instead of heartbeat kick try out

kick kick kick kick
clap clap

hope u get whut im trying 2 say dude...its the most simple beat on dance now days...

and while ure at it add some bass into it right AFTER the kick

well its not thut bad..uve improved...but u shud get some vareity on the track...

but anyways keep it up dude 7-10

Well at least it's a good song.

Hah I actually love this song, its just that this isn't even close to a dance song. Could you imagine seeing someone trying to dance to this? I gota say that would like preeedy stupid. But its a good song, 4/5