Let me guess, Fruity loops?

Really chill sound but I would have added some reverb to the first tunes. The beat came in and I new immediately you used Fruity Loops... Try to transform/sample/make your own beat! I was almost leaving your page!

BUT!!
When the song hit 0:27 a tune came in which really satisfied me ^^ It was so relaxed sounding! really nice.

Try to work out your beats and you will become better ;)
Good luck!

Greetz, Tred