I passed out while this song was playing...

not cause the song was boring, I was under the influence of a golden amber beverage, its a bit ironic after I listen to your verse sober. The verses are decent, steady flow from both of ya. The beat= great, I'm really loving the outro, its perfect with the piano and strings vibing out, it adds that 36 chambers of completion to the song (full circle).

I'm not a fan of the chorus(what a surprise, hey?). Nothing against your voice but it sounds too soft/forced emotion (for singing), and the flow of it sounds a bit rushed.

good track though, both of you should be proud of it.

regret

I really don't like this track... We didn't do a very good job imho..
We're prob both growing out of this whole 'sad, persecuted' track thing..

yuck...

hmm 3.41 / 5.00 (+ 0.56)

Looks like there is a little hate out here tonite. I thought the lyrics were really good on both verses on this one....Also couldnt find anything to improve. Overall, good track!