Tolgus

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Tolgus - Absolution

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Yeeah, so, my first submission to NG Audio. Great. The fact that i'm submitting something, not the song. Ugh. If you're wondering that the name doesn't fit, it's actually because the first thing that hit my head when i listened to it when complete "This is something absolutely different". It is. For me, i mean. So i trimmed it down. Lost the different, but absolutely didn't seem right, so that turned into Absolution. I like the sound of it. The name, i mean. Ugh, yeah. I talk a lot. Anyway, i hope you like it, even just a little bit, and i'm extremely open to criticism. If i aim to get better, then i have to be. Eh, just listen, and let me know what was the reaction you had.

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2010-01-09 07:54:35

Hmmmm, actually not so bad, more like good:)

Hi, Tolgus! I'm very glad you decided to submit on NG. I can promise you that it's worth it! :) Since this is your first submition, I will give you a very criticising review. Well, only so it would help you getting better. Btw. I hear that you have a great potensial to get very good! :D

First thing i would criticise is that the tune is kind of boring in the length, though some of the synths helps the tune.

The climax arrives to fast. It's like a snowball: suddenly it's not here and suddenly it is. You should try to make a longer and more exciting build up. 2nd time the climax is it just stops out of nowhere including the song. make an outro to the song. Try also to use a crash or something on the climax.

The bassdrum is way to low and unpowerfull. Also use a banging bass on the cilmax(between the bassdrum).

A big suggestion: Turn the tempo down to at least 140 bmp.

The song isn't so bad and if you fix on some of the sings i just wrote, it could get much better.

Hope you didn't find the review to much criticising...

keep up the good work! :)
Just keep producing and making songs and you'll get very good! :D

-EssenceOfTrance-

Tolgus responds:

Thanks. Yeah, i knew something was wrong and it needed a lot of work, but my interest in it kind of died. Always like that. But, on a next one i'll try to work on those points. Thanks for the review.