Yet Another (DEMO)

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Yet Another (DEMO)

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Here is what I have been working on for the past week. Is it worth more time? Leave votes and some comments please, let me know what you think!

-JNR

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Chomposaur

2010-02-12 20:22:49

Been awhile, but

just as good as the older stuff i heard, probably my favorite so far! make some more!

Jnr1114 responds:

Thanks! I will :D

Box-Killa

2010-01-15 10:41:13

cool

yeah it sounds a little robotic. You should work on changing the volume of each note to make it sound more human. Could also do with a bit of echo and reverb :D

nice job though, like the chord progression and melodies.

Jnr1114 responds:

Yeah, looking back on it now I noticed. I will humanize the best I can before I release the full version.

Thanks for the review!

RayJones321

2010-01-07 00:50:52

Good, but...

I think if it sounded more like the main melody was swooping (going up and down in volume on the beat), and you make the main beats more imposing and/or forceful, you would have something quite outstanding. I'm not saying it's not good, it is - but with some work it came become something truly great.

Jnr1114 responds:

I tried that a little. It really ruined the song. It kind of imploded it.
What I plan do to further is add some notes to the Trumpets and add some cymbals. Also make it longer with some more melodys.

Thanks for reviewing!

lidlurch

2010-01-06 22:15:23

hmm...epic

I really liked the horns and orchestration you added into it, it made this sound full, beautiful and moving. This is something you should definitely consider continuing! It's got a ton of potential to be a great symphonic piece, but I think that there should be a little more moving in the trumpet..well, high horn part at around 1:00. I can't really tell you what to do next, but the chords in this song are beautiful, the piecing together is fantastic. if you want to add some decoration, you could do a few more cymbal rolls, but that's really all I've got for you! Great work!

Jnr1114 responds:

Thanks! I like it a lot also. I will add more precession like cymbals and maybe some low velocity bells. I might do some stuff with the horn. I mostly moving toward making the piano more expanded not the trumpets but hey, I can give it a shot.

Thanks alot!

-JNR