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another Vocal job by your Boy Oliver Mars Stardust

Beat Produced by = flashmac [f]

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Nice

Good job with the track man.
The lyrics are pretty good and your flow is consistent.
A few things you could fix are the adlibs, they are a bit messy at times and makes it hard to understand what you're saying.
Another thing I noticed (and it might just be me) but when you sing, while it's not bad, it sounds more like it's to a rock song rather than a hip hop one and the pauses you placed were kinda random and long.
Other than that good job man, keep working on your vocals, they are only gonna get better.

5/5 - 5.00 / 5.00 (unchanged)

OliverStardust responds:

yeah its my style of things im not just a solid Hip Hop artist, my music flow is hip hop Electro Rock

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Jan 2, 2010
9:14 PM EST
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3.9 MB
3 min 24 sec

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