needs work

its definintly missing bass,
sure theres rhythm and lead, but bass is still important,
it help create depth in your work,
anyway, its just 4 parts playing in some order,
make a chorus, verse, ect.
and make them more distinguishable,
also, the drums are cool , but halve the time there not playing,

all in all, its kinda boring, and need some touching up first,

This is GOOD!

It's so out of this world different! It's awesome!

Hmmm....

Not bad, but it's boring... Make good...

Hmm..

oookaaaayyyyyy...........
I dont know what to say, but it reminded me Mentally Detached.
It's nice but i think you had bad idea, you need to really work more on it. There wasn't anything special on it, you need more sounds in it, it just have been boring after time. 7/10 4/5