Trance will do

Not a bad effort for your first piece, I must say. Any of the dance / house / trance / garage genres will do and I'm sure that some people will eventually show you what the proper genre for this is, but I'm not the one who knows.

I think that there's a good beat to this piece carrying it along, but it can get a little monotonous in the middle - at 6 minutes long, this piece is certainly in need of some variation, as it can get a little repetitive. I know that's what clubbers like, so stick to it, but add a few more bits and pieces in there that will keep the non-clubbers listening.

You could stand to cut this piece down to as much as 5 minutes long, but don't be disheartened, it's a good start and I think that you can certainly take it further, which I look forward to.

[Review Request Club]

Good try

This is a good first submission. Maybe a tad bit too long, but overall it's still a good song.

The intro could be a bit shorter and maybe you could shorten the song a bit in general. Namely towards the end it gets a bit repetitve. By shortening the track a bit, you could avoid this.

Also, there doesn't seem too much progression in this song. It stays at almost the same "energy level" the whole time. A few dynamics would get rid of this impression or maybe a few quieter parts here and there.

Also the main melody is too much in the background for my liking. It can hardly be heard behind the main beat.

{ Review Request Club }

WOW nice

This is pretty cool for your first submission! Only one flaw - the beginning section was a little too long for me. Other than that nice melody. It repeats but isn't boring.

9/10
5/5

Very nice

Alright very cool beat its defently worth 5/5 10/10. Keep them like this all new.. Very good work.