It's ok.

I'll give you an 8 because it's pretty good. Didn't anyone ever tell you that uploading your music to Youtube is a bad idea? It's so easy to download it for free from there.

I really wish you hadn't uploaded this.

It's truly wonderful, but personally I dislike demos a whole lot unless they can pass for a full song. This one is horrible in particular because it's such a tease that doesn't come through in the end.

What I really enjoy is the section in the middle. It's wonderful. Makes me think of someone trying to catch someone else who's falling. The first part of the song looks like they're gonna make it, and the middle part is when they miss the grab. Hence, Beyond Reach.

I don't mind the sudden transitions, but I do mind the sections being too short. I really hope you give the middle a lot of expansion and TLC because I think that's what helps make the song really stand out.

THE MIX

the mix is so good, i think i just jizzed. The chords were nice too.

Amazing.

You must make more..... 'Nuff said.

i will buy this song

when you finish this, i would buy this. its insanely good.

i swear. i want the full version.