Hmmm Ok
I'm taking your advice and checking some of your other work.. This one is much better then the other... The vocals are a bit better (still not the best).. and the lyrics make sense. The production is also very nice, the melodies, beat, and other additions to it are very nice.. although, I don't see any true talent here... don't get me wrong, the song is nice.. it's just not perfected. On this one, I'll give u a 4/5 and 8/10.
-DjT