Drums need more snap

That snare is way too weak and the kick needs more underneath it, layer a heavier bassy kick below it to strengthen it against the bass overtone instruments you're using. A little bit of creative EQ on all of the instruments to give them some breathing room would make this one snap out there and demand to be listened to. Maybe slap a gate on the guitar so it's tail isn't quite as long, with an LFO before that to give the tail some vibrato right before dying off.

Peace