Needs more

There isn't happening too much in this piece. While I can get the picture of a black abyss while listening to this it's just too repetitve with little to no changes during the song.

A few more instruments wouldn't hurt here and also a break in the current structure which seems to consist only of a single sound being repeated over and over again.

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Far too repetitive

Well, how depressing is a song going to sound after you pretty much drag a 10 second loop out for three minutes? The first basic suggestion is that you give some more impetus to the piece, by adding some variation, be it from additional instruments or from different, more catchy riffs.

I'd consider giving the piece a bass beat. You could make a bass beat that is slow and inevitable, such as a tolling bell that accompanies the track, as the seconds slice off the life of the listener, hastening their very doom.

If you're going for morbid, you found it, but that's mainly from a lack of effort, so change up the act and get people to like your music on merit.

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