awesome!

this peice is very tranquil and melodic
i would love to hear a finished version!
check out some of my stuff if you've got time :)

Really nice!

Well composed, I really like the strings and the piano, especially the diferent pianos working together

1. at 00.40 the I think the background strings are a little to loud, it dists my headset and is a little bit annoying

2. The string that enters in 00.45 sounds great, but I think it would be cool if it wasn't that bright and clear (if you know what i mean, I don't know how to explain) Worth trying perjhaps to make it a little more backgroundish?

3. I don't think of sadness when I hear this song... I think of hope, which is really cool. It's not bad, it's just that I do not feel that this is a sad song :)

Not much, but it was really all I could come up with, it is a really great tune you've created, let me know when it is finished!

I'm liking this!

This sounds brilliant :D I would say this song is more of an inspirational or a motivational song to be honest with you... can't wait to hear the final version though... 5/5, 10/10