It's ok.. Minor suggestions?

First of all you REALLY should remix this. It could become amazing. Even fade in's and fade out's + reverse will create an amazing song. It will fit the name aswell. Try to make it no so repetitive.. It kills our ears, and most of all our interest. :/
The build up was amazing and all, but make sure the transitions actually sound like a transition. Goodluck on future works.
~Akumin Beast~