well...
i play a lot of games when im at home ...and from many different genras.... same with music haha(i have no life)
anyway judging by the music im guesing you guyz are goin for a...not necicarily action sequence for this but a little lower . it could work for the credits aswell.
if im right and it is like an action sequence then you might want a little more bass
also if its credits then probably somethin a little calmer ya kno
now it also seems as though it could be a puzzle game...no seriously im not talkin god of war im talkin yahoo games jigsaw srry but thats what it sounds like and if that is what yall are goin for ....maybie a little less bass at the begining of the track then slowly build up and keep it lower than what it is all the way through.
once again im not sure what type of game your doing and whatnot so if i had more info i could help more.... please send a pm if you wish to give me more info so i can help more... all in all tho, i like it, its a good track
hpe this helps and good luck
jp