hmmm not sure what to say...

A smooht opening and a nice beat all the way... bu repetetive,, but at the same time not.
and a quick but ok end.
a overall good melodie.
the voice was a bit weird, in my weird mind god should sound more clear and you know godlike...
yeah im not good at rewieving stuff:P

keep it up.
BTW: you can use the little lyric i made at "Through Clouds" as you see fit,;)