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Halindir - Burden

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Good development

I could definately make out a clear distinction between areas without being overt about it. I would agree with Benjamin that your melody would benifit from a transfer of instruments, but I would even venture to say change registers of either the solo instrument or accompaniment! That way, you could let your melody sing out on a totally new color of the instrument of your choice!

I am not really sensing a climax, but if it was in your design to do so, then that is what you want no matter what I would say.

Good job, nontheless!

Gorgeous.

Gorgeous harmonies here, so smooth. It IS simple, but I don't mean that as a criticism. Rather, it's very touching. Especially the last minute, which just falls and falls in such a beautifully lilting way. Unfortunately it doesn't loop very well, that could be improved on. Also, I wonder if the melody starting at 1:09 could be put in another instrument so it doesn't blend in so much with the slow strings. Maybe a slightly bolder sound over the strings, like a solo horn or bassoon. Ending with positive: I'm downloading this track for sure. Solid 9/10.

Halindir responds:

Thank you very much for the comment BenjaminTibbetts. I will try out your advice on the melody at 1:09.

Over all, good but To simple

I find it a very nice bit of music, only downside is I find it way to simple for even classical music.
With that said With what it is, it is very good, I could see this as a nice Long drawn out Backround, Very nice and relaxing. But Needs a bit more to it.

Halindir responds:

Thanks for your positive words Schmee12.
Although I wanted it to be monotonous, i agree it could be better with more variation

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Oct 7, 2009
3:51 AM EDT
Genre
Classical
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2 min 55 sec

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