hey

dude
i REALLY like the paino in the beginning
sounds real tight
however, i dont like how you dropped the beat at 1:04 into something completely different. i would add the strings from the beginning after the beat
the piano in the beginning could be a little more quiet, you can barely hear the strings
i like the progression though after the beat
and how the main melody of the piano eventually comes back in
you could also make the beat a tad louder, and add change ups to it
i could help you more if this was intended for a certain genre

i dont understand why its rated so low though
people should listen to the progression more
good piece
Fayde