Score: 8

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by: Fro

date: October 11, 2009

Well I guess I have the same complaints as the other people had. The transitions were a bit rough and that's coming from someone that really doesn't know much about music, which means they were a bit obvious in this submission. :P

The song itself is pretty good though. It really reminds me of something where you would see a character discovering a wonderful world that he has never seen before and there isn't any limits on what he can do. It kind of goes with the title of the song as well.

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Score: 9

"brilliant work.."

by: Darklight17

date: October 11, 2009

Intro was a bit too drawn out but when the new isntruments set in, it instantly got better, and when the melody came in it got way better. I liked the 8-bit instruments you used as they really set off the video gameish style in it.

Transition somewher round 1:30 wasn't good though adn it really needs improvement in only that part.

I'd really imagine this in a flash platform game which is set in an 8-bit fantasy world.

Good job throughout, keep it up!

Darklight17
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Score: 9

"Pretty good."

by: sumidiotdude

date: October 10, 2009

I like the 8-bit sound to this piece. I especially like at about twenty seconds when you have the notes go up and down the scales, it sounds awesome. Plus the recurring tune will be stuck in my head all day. I didn't really like how much the beginning sounded like the end, but I did enjoy how catchy the beat was. Keep up the great work!

Score: 9

"Nice!"

by: Supersteph54

date: October 10, 2009

Wow, this is so fun to listen to. Keep up the great work, it's really well done!

The melodies sound familiar, but that doesn't matter, because they sound so great. They're very catchy and happy, plus they fit with the song in general very well. This needs more alternate melodies though. Instruments were an 8-bit wonder, never had 8-bit instruments sounded so awesome.

Transitions were fine, and there were some good buildups in the song. One problem though: the rythm change at 1:25 was a good idea, but came in too suddenly with a rough transition, so you should follow Haggard's idea of the fading beats. Good song structure, but the first buildup kept going on a bit too long IMO. Variety needs working on a little here too, since this does get quite repetitive, with only one melody. As for the intro and outro, they both were fine, and this looped really well too.

The drums were perfect for 8-bit with really nice beats, and were just the right loudness. May I ask which VST/Drum Kit you used for those 8-bit drums? They sound amazing.

Overall, I really enjoyed this song. Keep up the amazing work, looks like you're good at Industrial AND 8-bit too! Good job!
9/10
5/5

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Score: 8

"Not bad"

by: Coop83

date: October 9, 2009

If you hadn't made the intro so long, relative to the length of the rest of the tune, this would be a stellar piece. Sometimes, too much buildup can prove to be a track's undoing, as it has here. Try throwing 2 or 3 elements into the tune together, or go through less runs of the basic component loop before you get to adding a new piece.

I can certainly say that the latter part of the track sounds great - there is a wealth of great sounds that would certainly make this feel at home in a Kirby or even perhaps a LoZ setting. Keep working at it and you'll have something that artists want to use :)

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