lol

you really need to work on quality. You need to be less silly, well you can be silly but be

serious about making a good song, this song lacked proffessionalism, which doesnt have

to come from having a mega mega super song, but to see effort, is what i mean

this seems a bit like rap or something,

Keep up the good work :D

If you have any time, can you check this out (Take out gaps in link)

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/274547

Thanks a bunch

Peaceout :D

[Box-Killa]