Nifty

Cool enough to favorite? yes.

Interesting...

For a first submission this isn't half bad, not half bad at all. I'm actually kind of impressed for this being a first submission honestly.

For starters your mix is really nice. The percussion could be slightly louder, but that is just personal opinion. What you have at the moment is a nice ensemble. Everything really fits well in its own little place in the mix and that is important.

You did a nice job in creating interesting melody lines with that lead synth you are using. It has a certain wah wah effect kinda going on, almost guitar-ish in its tone as well. Makes it very enjoyable to listen to.

The song progresses well and really flows from section to section. There is no moment in the song where anything really sounds out of place, or poorly written. It's smooth my friend, smooth indeed.

One thing I would hit on is adding a little bit of variety maybe. It seems like the same percussion rhythm is being used throughout the entire song, and that kinda turns me off a bit. Also the lead synth is the same throughout the entire song. Maybe think of switching it out during a breakdown section or something to create a different feel for a little bit.

Overall I enjoyed this, even though it isn't my typical listening style.

4/5 and 8/10 overall. It's a nice little song, but not really anything extraordinary. Definitely a solid first submission though. :-)

-Gravey-