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Credits & Info

Date
09/22/2009
File Info
Song
1.4 MB
1 min 16 sec
Score
2.51 / 5.00

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Score:
Rated 2.51 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
274 Plays | 30 Downloads
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Genres:
Other - Miscellaneous
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Author Comments

It's not perfect.

Reviews


DJ-BertDJ-Bert

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars September 27, 2009

yay!

you got better! so now i can see this as a song!

the problem is you never create an atmosphere with your songs, just (sometimes catchy melodies)

the drums need to be less random; if you don't know how to make drums good just use someone elses sampled drums!

also you do not have a bass instrument! you need one to build atmosphere.

also, your strings! they are sampled. try to make some in sytrus and add some effects to it!

one more thing: effects, effects, effects.

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hope you build apon my advice


JD14 responds:

I see exactly what you mean here, but, this song is old :U
I already have been given this advice before =P and I'm working on that stuff. I think I'm getting better with drums; these ones seem entirely random and yeah I definately do need some kind of a bass instrument in this song. I don't plan to update it, though.


aloneagainfriendaloneagainfriend

Rated 5 / 5 stars September 22, 2009

The melodys are PERFECT!

but yeah the beats seem to need a tad bit of work... still a 5/5 from me...

check out my new track too plz :)


JD14 responds:

=P yeah it needs some work. I just posted it because my friend wanted to hear it and he couldn't DL it on his comp. So far I guess it's listenable, but it does need work.
Time to listen to your song =P