yay!

you got better! so now i can see this as a song!

the problem is you never create an atmosphere with your songs, just (sometimes catchy melodies)

the drums need to be less random; if you don't know how to make drums good just use someone elses sampled drums!

also you do not have a bass instrument! you need one to build atmosphere.

also, your strings! they are sampled. try to make some in sytrus and add some effects to it!

one more thing: effects, effects, effects.

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hope you build apon my advice

The melodys are PERFECT!

but yeah the beats seem to need a tad bit of work... still a 5/5 from me...

check out my new track too plz :)