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It's not perfect.
you got better! so now i can see this as a song!
the problem is you never create an atmosphere with your songs, just (sometimes catchy melodies)
the drums need to be less random; if you don't know how to make drums good just use someone elses sampled drums!
also you do not have a bass instrument! you need one to build atmosphere.
also, your strings! they are sampled. try to make some in sytrus and add some effects to it!
one more thing: effects, effects, effects.
hope you build apon my advice
I see exactly what you mean here, but, this song is old :U
I already have been given this advice before =P and I'm working on that stuff. I think I'm getting better with drums; these ones seem entirely random and yeah I definately do need some kind of a bass instrument in this song. I don't plan to update it, though.
The melodys are PERFECT!
but yeah the beats seem to need a tad bit of work... still a 5/5 from me...
check out my new track too plz :)
=P yeah it needs some work. I just posted it because my friend wanted to hear it and he couldn't DL it on his comp. So far I guess it's listenable, but it does need work.
Time to listen to your song =P
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