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See in this one the bass is a bit over powering I'd try to aim for a middle sound so that the bass isn't too much the other one the bass is just a bit too soft. I'd saying patch up the drums a bit more and you got it : ) As a song though I enjoy it very tranquil kinda makes me think I'm out watching the ocean or something.

I like where this is heading...

This is very calming,i just to sit back an relax...after i give a 5/5 and 10/10 that is :)