very potential melody...

work on it...use more reverb, another synth maybe and you could really make a great dance track

OMG!

WOW! The freqz on the high end melody kinda hurt the ears, and there seems to be an off note around 1:14, but otherwise I HONESTLY LOVE THIS TRACK! GOOD WORK! I wanna hear more tracks like this.... Maybe with a wet, wide, four on the floor, dance style kick. GOOD STUFF!!!

Please check out my new track, people think it's my best one yet (but maybe thats just 'cause I suck :P).