My review, your song.

Opens with distorted lead guitar.

Breif pause, drums come in and the guitar sound like its chorused, but no bass or further accompaniment to the melody is introduced.

Then song progresses, nothing after the little bridge at 0:30ish stands out.

A common problem with songs featuring distorted guitars is that they get this grainy white noise esque sound to them, and it makes focusing on them a bit difficult. Where as say the intro, outro and bridge were done with something less distorted, you'd suddenly create a huge dynamic change in pacing and sound style, and the minute peice you have so far would be far more diverse, and interesting to listen to.

Drums are decent, they're mixed up a bit and sound alright. Might just be my currently bad headphones, but the drum kick was a little bit weak.

Song felt a bit mono, or atleast not utilising stereo to its fullest.

The melody playing I quite liked.

Overall, not bad, but lacking focus.

3/5 7/10