rap songs dont need words

i like the intro part being separate from the main body of the song. the main body also is really good. if u wanna get insainly technical i would say maybe have a bass melody in the hearing threshold that compliments the drums, just to harden the loop and add a little more continuity. also maybe turn the bass down cause theres a bit of feedback throught the chorus and verse. the scratching works really well and the goodnight sample suits well. sorry if my analysis of ur stuff seems over critical, i certainly couldnt do any better, im just offering an opinion. keep goin with the hip hop beats bro, its sounding sweet!!

sublime

The beat was fresh,.. but you have to consider that rapping over this can be a bitch though..

You've got them breaks in the beat that aren't really flowing with the whole of the track...
It can be be fresh ,.. but if ya rapping with a chorus the 'untimed' break is a bitch.

other than that the beat is tight...

wow....

wow thas all I got to say the melody wuz tight as fuck u gettin a ten and 5 from me thas all I got to say the bass is crazy u made my cpu shake and everything I had my subwoofer up
good shit man u have skillz and as I said be4 fuck tha haters