Got potential.

For starters, I gotta admit the melody is pretty good. I wasn't too fond of the drums however. Sounds like you took the basic snare in the FL Studio Dance pack, and a basic kick, with added Fast Dist and Blood Overdrive (yeah, I've been there :P).
The kick has to stretch out a lot longer, now it's just a kick with a really short decay. I suggest building your own kicks from scratch with 3xosc. It can make pretty good kicks if you take the time for it.

Overall, it was pretty good, I just didn't like the drums in the track. Keep it up man, just try building your own kicks. Looking forward to hearing from you again :)

Nice

You did a nice job on this whether or not it's hardcore. It wasn't perfect though, around 1:00 it started getting a little annoying. It needs to be smoothed out a bit, at the moment some parts don't mix too well together. But don't worry about fitting into a certain genre, if you think it sounds good, than upload it. Don't follow anyone else, do your own thing.