So i started making this a week or so ago and have been working on it between school stuff on my spare time. The ending is really iffy (as in it will most likely change) and its not fully completed yet, so what is the end now wont be the end when im done. well, apart from that i thought it had a nice feel to it, so enjoy :)
So far so good
With more work, this could be a truly great track. I'm especially loving the choirs and the transition from the pluck to the piano around 1:20. It could also do with a more defined bassline(if it was there to begin with, I'm not sure) and a short melody to seal things up.
Great work so far!
hmmm... good suggestion, i like what you're thinking... well i'll see what i can do, and thanks tons for the review =D
i agree
the ending needs work. other than that i like the swells the song has. you repeat, but it doesn't sound boring. keep up the good work.
thanks =D
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
EbonHawk7X 
