Its Almost There...
I really like what you are doing here, It has a very original type feeling to it.
[Even though its not.]
I do like the vocals, but they do get repetitive. [The background vocal]
However, I really don't see how you could do the song properly without them.
[Try adding different vocals in the 1:06 - The End]
But otherwise, its a very nice song.
5/5 and 9/10 <-- You'll get my 10 and download when its revised. (^.^)
Hope this helps,
-Nubby Cakums