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Hey man, your getting the idea, this is good, but your instruments Over power eachother WAY too much, you gotta learn to mix them up so that you get the feel of each of them, also maybe you could learn abiout harmonization...Nopt many NG artists have a clue what harmonazation is and they call themselves artists,so make the change learn harmonization and then youll get so much better trust me.

Harmonization is simple...learn teh minor, major, chords at the least and youll get the hang of it
Theres much more you could learn about harmonization but for techno it isnt all that necessacary... Keep it up

Nicolas...

good

"I disagree with the last review, the sounds fit very well together. I especially like the "chopped up" softer line in the middle and how it combines with the first, harsher line at the end.

"It could have benefitted from more harmony and variation though. The melody is cool, but it's repeated too much, you should vary it through the song, or switch it up more often with something else (that fits)."

nothing fits...

i'm sorry, but musically, none of the lines you picked really fit together in any way...i really liked in the fade-in in the beginning, and the dark style is really nice, but try to be more melodic next time...good try. cheers an g'day.