My review, your song.
So very chill.
Loving the melody and sound set, gritty in nature but playing such easy going music. Sounds like good morgue waiting room music.
The only thing I think this needs is the drums to be a bit more in the forefront of the song, and a more looping ending/beginning so I can forget I'm listening to this, and only realize after 20 play throughs its still tickling my ear drums.
5/5 8/10
On a side note, it would be bad ass to have some turn-tablism going on a vocal track, but that either requires the expensive hardware, or hours of tweaking some vocal samples. :P