Ok, I made this for my friend's intro for youtube, and this is the best way I can think of to share it with him without spending time on a video. So, I'm uploading here. Even though this wasn't made to be the next infernoplex or something like that, I'd still appreciate some feedback as far as how well I did with this. I made it like 4 times to get the right sound. Please rate and review, and hopefully this will help me make you guys better songs.
first review on this, nothing personal
your composition was a little too monophonic. you only use one instrument on this piece. the composition was weird. the end was like,"what next?" things in my head. sorry dude, accept criticisms and learn from mistakes.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
IRockThs 
